نام داستان: Without You (بدون تو) - نوشته : شاهین نورصالحی
Short story: Without You
(Written On Facebook!)
-You ask me: "What did you feel last night?" -And I answer you: "Felt like a stranger who travel between no where and goodbye, to the forgotten city destination..." -Now, what are you feeling now?
Hossein Mahboubi at 8:21am April 25
Hmmm, I don't feel at all. Are you sure about the feeling? 'Cause I'm afraid there is no "you" !
Shahin Noursalehi at 8:25am April 25
Sure It's not me!!!!
I'm about writing a short story. I afraid nobody understand the style and mood of the story :-S ...
It seems it is going hard to understand however it is not a popular one...
Give me more responds plz...
Hossein Mahboubi at 8:29am April 25
Everything that matters is what you feel 'cause the only way you realize outside world is your feelings ( which is by the way a poor diagnostic device with lots of errors and miscalculations)
you may never find out the true shape of a thing in darkness! It's the same about your feelings, you just feel but maybe there's nothing and maybe there's another thing but what can you do? huh?
So stick to your feelings or otherwise you will loose your mind!
Shahin Noursalehi at 8:37am April 25
So let me give you a littel help!
It's about a man who try to dare with gravity! And this is his dream after a full working day...
Now, can you feel this weight-less-ness?
if not, I lose in this story and may discard it :(:(
Hossein Mahboubi at 9:33am April 25
what do you ean by dare to gravity?
Shahin Noursalehi at 9:42am April 25
Try "sky diving" for example...
It seams this man tries to experience feel what and how is NOTHING-feeling...
So it is obvious that this man is not about experience sky diving. sure, this is not that important aim...
Let see what will come in continue... :->
Hossein Mahboubi at 9:47am April 25
cool, waiting for it
Shahin Noursalehi at 1:24pm April 26
One day a psychologist while visiting a new patient, found something special in her speeches. She was in love to a man but he had said goodbye to their relationship. Up to this stage, there was every thing - in this case - in a normal way but after more sessions doctor found out the way she describe her feeling about her broken heart has some relations together.
Most used words while describing her feelings were: weight-less-ness, suicide, willing to happiness, an abroad, and clouds.
All those words addressed the doctor to the sky diving – unconsciously! So he asked the girl to experience all those words-mean in a package of sky diving. In other words, he decided to give - all that she was feeling - to her with an extra dose of adrenalin!
Also, doctor decided to accept this case as a case-study and follow up.
Ali Reza Faraji at 11:58pm April 26
Congratulation Shaheeeeeen, You've got a wonderful Imagination n creativity.
I Love the Point That, Doctor asked the girl to experience all those words-mean in a package of sky diving.
Shahin Noursalehi at 1:36am April 27
To be continued, Alireza!
Hossein Mahboubi at 5:31am April 28 via Facebook Mobile
your're weird, dude
Shahin Noursalehi at 10:17am May 1
Doctor (Bob), preventing of non-attendance of patient’s (Alice) to the program sent enough credit to the sky diving club and asked Alice just attend to the sessions every weak.
The first day of her attendance to the program was a full time wasting because she was indifferent to her environment. So, Bob also decided to attend the program for detail observation. The next session was a complete pack of fear and excite! Bob and Alice in the same position, ready to jump.
Before Jump, Bob just answered smiles to the Alice nervously questions. She just talked and talked; up to the time they jump! She closed her eyes, screamed and finally went into quiet and left the club with no goodbye.
The next session, Bob asked Alice: How did you feel last night?
And Alice said: Just felt like a stranger in a forgotten city!
Shahin Noursalehi at 9:12am May 24
As days go by, the Bob’s theory about bring happiness to the Alice life got true cover and she was filling well. But there was something going wrong with the doctor! He was addicted to those sessions, not the sky diving but Alice. He felt in love with her.
Once Alice found out that it was so late. She decided to stop the program because Bob asked her for marriage with a golden ring in hand!
Alice went to a long travel to break the new relation but she broke Bob. Looking forward to Alice brought bitter sweet to his life.
Alice decided to know about Bob. She sent an email to him and asked the old question: "What did you feel last night?"
And Bob replied: "Felt like a stranger who travel between no where and goodbye, to the forgotten city destination..."
Again after months, she sent another email to him and asked the old question: "What did you feel last night?"
And Bob replied: "Felt like a bird which fly between mountain high and sky, to the sunshine city destination..."
Now, what are you feeling now?
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